Is the proposed text supposed to be the whole of the new Constitution or just a rewriting of the first part? There does need to be some statement of what the Taliari are and how they are selected. Whether this belongs in the Constitution or in the Laws might be a matter of debate. I recall that when I was commenting on Luth's original proposal, there was a fundamental disagreement between us as to what the scope of a Constitution should be.
I should note that one of the game playing requirements of the past has been that the leaders of the Nation are played by the Event Team, and the same for leaders of the Cities, so it may be difficult or impossible to get rid of the Governor and the Kard'ali. (Not that I would want to get rid of the office held by so many courageous and noble Trykers.)
Good luck with this.
-- Bittty.
P.S. - Can we get rid of the "Federal Anthem" unless there is actually words and music for it?
I should note that one of the game playing requirements of the past has been that the leaders of the Nation are played by the Event Team, and the same for leaders of the Cities, so it may be difficult or impossible to get rid of the Governor and the Kard'ali. (Not that I would want to get rid of the office held by so many courageous and noble Trykers.)
Good luck with this.
-- Bittty.
P.S. - Can we get rid of the "Federal Anthem" unless there is actually words and music for it?
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Remembering Tyneetryk
Phaedreas Tears - 15 years old and first(*) of true neutral guilds in Atys.
(*) This statement is contested, but we are certainly the longest lasting.
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