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Bitttymacod (atys)
"Completely forgetting the eminent threat of the kirosta..." should not use 'eminent' (meaning over-reaching) but 'imminent' (meaning coming soon).  "As the kipesta soon spread through her jungle,..." would be better as "As the kipesta rapidly spread through her jungle,..."
Ooh, thanks for those catches; I just kinda threw it together after I arrived at work. My sleeping schedule got thrown outta wack and I wasn't thinking clearly at all. Just something I came up with during break time.
Bitttymacod (atys)
...The sun never sets and never rises; it flares.  ...the "stars" in the night sky are not (cannot be) distant fixed points. They are an atmospheric artifact.  Everyone calls them stars, however...
Ayyyy, super-important. Yeah, my premises were that Lucere's latent mastery of magnetism (or rather the fields of flux permeating everything) allowed her to percieve the cosmic forces between the stars. :D There goes that idea. Didn't know the sun flared. I assumed that orangy-glowy nebula at night was just a nebula or something... since it moved across the sky. :/
Based most of my idea off the picture of Atys, rather than lore. Been years since I've played. Is there a dense canopy of leaves amongst the Upper Branches? The Ryzom website background shows only sparse foliage. Or is Silan directly under a leafed area?
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