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Colour me Purple; an Atysian science-fiction story.

A very worthy experiment, Hailuan.

I would point out that your experience that it got away from you is common in new writers and prevalent in those with experience. Combined with world-building, the amount of work can be very large.

I thought 1 and 3 were the best. The capturing of the Tryker free spirit in the young girl mixed with the enforced seriousness of the guards was very good. The hints at the basis of the story were well handled. In three, the care of the mother for her child and the casual acceptance of their numbers being limited by the number of Kami fragments made for very good story telling. The other stories were good, but those two were my favorites.


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