Pretty clearly not a haiku, or even a haiku chain, but I like the use of the aab rhyme scheme with the b-rhyme repeated in each verse. The unbridled enthusiasm of the speaker comes through very well.
This reminds me that I need to get back to my songs. Blues Songs of the Harvester will be coming out Soon(TM).
This reminds me that I need to get back to my songs. Blues Songs of the Harvester will be coming out Soon(TM).
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Remembering Tyneetryk
Phaedreas Tears - 15 years old and first(*) of true neutral guilds in Atys.
(*) This statement is contested, but we are certainly the longest lasting.
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